Model Essay Revision

Click here for the draft rubric for your "one-pager" revision. Your expanded paper should be in the 2-3 pages range, typed, double-spaced, with MLA format (including the full header and a creative but non-bold, non-italic title).

Remember what that looks like? Sure you do!

John Doe
Ms. Kitsis
AP Language & Composition
18 November 2008

Indicate your statement of purpose either by underlining it in the paper or stating it below, as with the one-pagers. Finally, include a brief paragraph of reflection on the process of revision. What were you trying to accomplish by expanding the piece? What were your successes? Where did you feel you were still struggling?

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